Friday, December 14, 2007

Creating Visual Scenes by Dorian Scott Cole

Creating Visual Scenes
Copyright © 2003, Dorian Scott Cole

EXCERPTS:

Step 1.
Think of a scene as a miniature story. Scenes typically have a very brief opening that establishes the conflict, followed by rising tension, and a climactic resolution. Thinking through the scene, and then creating a representative shot, will help focus the drama and influence the visual presentation.

To create a story arc (rising tension) and a representative shot, ask yourself what character need is driving the action to this scene, why there will be a conflict, and what is going to happen in the scene.

Step 2.
Ask how important the scene is to the story. If the scene was missing, would the story still be intact? If no, it is an important scene, so choose an appropriate setting that enhances the drama, and if needed, give it time. But if the scene isn't that important, use the available locations or sets, and give it less time.

Step 3.
Sketch a single shot that represents the entire drama in the scene. This very visual shot would represent the height of tension where the conflict is fully developed, the climax.

This shot can also form the locus of activity in a short scene, so the drama will focus in this space. Any other set features then are incidental, and are there for variety only. However, creating too many scenes in this manner, that limit physical action to a small space, would make the movie (or novel) come off like a stage play. Cinema presents the probability of larger movement. Establishing a locus is one helpful technique for creating a short scene.

In the scene, to create the arc (rising tension) think through the battle. Make sure that the physical action matches your character's personality.

What would your character do? Think about a range of actions: cry, beg, demand, argue, build a case, use metaphors to help... While the original picture may tell the story, an individual character action may need to be altered to fit his personality.

When you are finished, you have a scene that is presented visually, is dynamic, and fits your character.

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Advanced Writing - Adapted from Writers Workshop Script Doctor

Advanced Writing - Adapted from Writers Workshop Script Doctor
Copyright © 1994, 2001, Dorian Scott Cole

Information on these pages is for writers who want to perfect their writing by raising their skills and writing standards to a very accomplished stage.
Creating Visual Scenes
Not "Just The Facts" In Stories
Engaging the Audience with Questions
Showing and Telling in Film
Understanding and Using Symbols
How To Engage The Audience
Making Stories Visual
The Writer's Craft - Views
The Purpose Of Dialogue
Using Concept To Focus The Story
Base The Story On Character Or Situation?
Choosing A Genre
Creating Honest Characters
Realism: Where To Draw The Line
Emotional Distancing
Developing Symbols and Motifs
Originality - Stretch Your Writing Skills
Originality - Outrun Tired, Predictable Storylines
Writing In Sequences
How To Raise Dead Characters
How To Use Motivation To Form Characters And Plot
What Is Visual Writing?
Five Power Points In Stories
Where To Begin Writing. How To Fix Your Story
Wife For Sale Example - Writing By Process Example
How to critique a screenplay (or story)

Distribution notice (General): You are free to give this article in its entirety to others (small groups, under 100) as long as the copyright with my name (Dorian Scott Cole) is included.

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Hollywood's Best Kept Secret: The Expanded Scene Breakdown

from Christopher Keane:

"What is Hollywood's Best Kept Screenwriting Secret? Answer: The Expanded Scene Breakdown. What is the Expanded Scene Breakdown? It's the middle step between the story development stage and the script itself.

Another step in the screenwriting process, you ask?

The Expanded Scene Breakdown is a 20 to 40+ page point by point, step by step, scene by scene outline of the entire screenplay in prose form using dialogue, character development, action, etc. It's an essential way to see the entire movie before you reach the screenplay stage."

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